Great stuff so far - I've said it in the reviews, but it bears repeating - poor Tilly! You really convey her dislocation and awkwardness in her new life, but also her indomitable spirit. And poor Nat! Can't wait for the Colonel to unleash hell on Torchwood for their thuggish shenanigans (well, unleashing hell might be a bit strong, but I bet he'll give them a good talking too!).