thisbluespirit (
thisbluespirit) wrote2010-02-19 07:48 pm
Entry tags:
Fic: Deadman Walking
All right, I confess. I wrote a ficlet before I posted anything! (For my fake show no. 1, that is). As you can see, because I then stole the title back off myself. As you do...
Story: Deadman Walking
Author:
lost_spook
Rating: All ages
Word Count: 264
Characters/Pairings: Mary, Deadman
Warnings: None. (Well, except for nothing happening, no fun ghosts and so on.)
Summary: Mary sees someone surprisingly familiar outside of the hotel.
***
Deadman Walking
The first time she saw him alive it gave her a jolt; a moment of electric shock that stopped her in her tracks, but when she turned around she couldn’t find him again amongst the mass of people.
She hadn’t expected that. Normally when she or anyone else saw him, he wasn’t at his best: pale, a stab wound to the chest. (Well, dead, basically.) It was only in her mind’s eye that she saw him as he once must have been; never in reality.
It scared her, because given the time she’d been having, she could easily be going mad and this might be the final proof.
The second time, he was walking towards her along the street and she could hardly mistake him. She stopped, someone behind her bumping into her and muttering as they passed on. He saw her, but there was no recognition in his face, though he smiled and winked as he headed back up towards the town centre.
She watched him go and wondered how to explain that away. Maybe it was impossible, but nevertheless relatively simple: maybe Deadman was actually still alive? His appearances at the hotel could be some sort of temporal anomaly, or a warning, a projection back in time, not a haunting left by something that had already happened. Maybe there was a chance to prevent whatever him winding up as a bloodied corpse in a hotel bathroom? That would be a good thing.
It could be, she thought, and then smiled to herself because Harrison wasn’t going to like it when she told him.
***
Story: Deadman Walking
Author:
Rating: All ages
Word Count: 264
Characters/Pairings: Mary, Deadman
Warnings: None. (Well, except for nothing happening, no fun ghosts and so on.)
Summary: Mary sees someone surprisingly familiar outside of the hotel.
***
Deadman Walking
The first time she saw him alive it gave her a jolt; a moment of electric shock that stopped her in her tracks, but when she turned around she couldn’t find him again amongst the mass of people.
She hadn’t expected that. Normally when she or anyone else saw him, he wasn’t at his best: pale, a stab wound to the chest. (Well, dead, basically.) It was only in her mind’s eye that she saw him as he once must have been; never in reality.
It scared her, because given the time she’d been having, she could easily be going mad and this might be the final proof.
The second time, he was walking towards her along the street and she could hardly mistake him. She stopped, someone behind her bumping into her and muttering as they passed on. He saw her, but there was no recognition in his face, though he smiled and winked as he headed back up towards the town centre.
She watched him go and wondered how to explain that away. Maybe it was impossible, but nevertheless relatively simple: maybe Deadman was actually still alive? His appearances at the hotel could be some sort of temporal anomaly, or a warning, a projection back in time, not a haunting left by something that had already happened. Maybe there was a chance to prevent whatever him winding up as a bloodied corpse in a hotel bathroom? That would be a good thing.
It could be, she thought, and then smiled to herself because Harrison wasn’t going to like it when she told him.
***
no subject
(And you're sneaky!)
no subject
Thanks! :-)
no subject
And it was very good indeed - I wonder what Harrison will have to say (that was a hint, by the way...)?
no subject
:-p
And thanks. And, no, it's not the continuing kind of fic. It gave me my central dynamics and the solution to the problem I set myself. (So, actually, maybe I'm lying - maybe I wrote this before the second post? My memory...)
Plus, the other thing about this, is I can write original fic and have suitable icons. It's very entertaining.
no subject
Seriously, I think you've got some ideas and characters here that are too good to waste - do something with them.
I didn't even write fic about my own show...this meme has bitten me bad, it would seem. Must...resist...
no subject
no subject
no subject
Revisit? Oh. Have we moved on while I've been away, because I haven't. I had to have something to think about on the train. Heh.
no subject
no subject
no subject
no subject
This is the exact scene that I was tempted to write, by the way. HILARIOUS. I love how Deadman smiles, and I love how Mary reasons so logically that it must just be a temporal anomaly. Oh, of course, just a temporal anomaly. Not weird at all after everything else that's happened!
no subject
*goes away to sob into pillow*
Thanks, though! :-D