Date: 1 Nov 2010 10:46 am (UTC)
ext_3965: (Downton Abbey - Bates/Anna)
Ah Downton Abbey! Since you've not seen it, I won't comment further!

ETA: Couple of post-beta-ish things:

"I want get them home, and you could do it — and you stand there arguing with me over your precious principles-.”

There should be a "to" between "want" and "get"....

“That had better work,” Janeway told him. “And you need to clear out your pockets first next time you’re going to get tied to some unsuspecting individual.”

"you need to clear out your pockets first next time" is confusingly phrased. I'd suggest "you need to clear out your pockets before you next get tied to some..." Or stick a comma after "first"!
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