Date: 20 Oct 2009 01:33 pm (UTC)
David sat down on the floor, leaning against the wall and pulled out his own notebook. “It’s completely impossible for us to go from one point in time and space almost instantaneously like that, so what’s outside can’t be real, only some sort of trick. There isn’t much point in it, is there?”

The Doctor opened his mouth and then shut it again and thought some more. “And how old are you?”

“Eleven and three months, sir.”

He could only stare at him. “What do they teach you at that school?”

“Not very much,” returned David, shutting up the notebook, on being approached on a sensible subject. “But the library is good and it’s better than the other school.”



I love this part. It's very Terry Pratchett-ish, and made of win, and there is always one like that. The rest of the story's pretty damn winful as well, and you write Peri rather finely, but that's the bit that stands out for me.
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