Fic End Game - Ch 24

[thisbluespirit]

I've just posted Chapter Twenty-Four.

In which Nat's nightmare becomes real.

(I'd hoped to get more than that, but I failed to do things like sleep last night... Anyway, that was the bit that needed re-writing, so the next bit should be up tomorrow.) I've only just posted it, so don't know when it may be okayed.

Comments

[persiflage-1.livejournal.com]

As a sentence it definitely needs some work! o_O

[thisbluespirit]

Yep. I've altered it to something like not feeling that 'lucky' was any way to describe the state his arm was in.

[persiflage-1.livejournal.com]

So long as it's fixed!