Fic: One Good Fall (Deserves Another)

[thisbluespirit]

Fic! 500 Prompts fic; also for a bingo square! (AU meme fic 1 down, 10 pending, shhh. I wrote a thing, anyway.)

Title: One Good Fall (Deserves Another)
Author: lost_spook
Rating: PG
Word Count: 1766
Characters/Pairings: Fifth Doctor, Clara Oswald
Notes/Warnings: Also for genprompt_bingo square "someone or something falls" and hc_bingo square “falling.”
Summary: The Doctor finds himself hanging on for dear life yet again…

For romanajo123 in the 500 Prompts Meme: 020 Gaping chasm – Five & Clara.

Here at AO3 | at the Teaspoon.

Comments

[persiflage_1]

Some beta-ish comments:

We were circling above in orbit for and I might possibly have pressed some buttons I shouldn’t have - you appear to be missing 1 or more words after 'orbit for'.

I fell from the sky like a shooting star, that how I like to put it - that's rather than that

He wished they’d thought about more in the ay of safety features - way not ay

were also likely to have been a good deal smaller than the two of them. - they before were also

even as she caught as his arm - at his not as his

All of sudden I’ve gone right off depths. - a before sudden

[thisbluespirit]

Thanks! All fixed. (Well, except one, which isn't an error, just a result of awkward phrasing I can't think how to do it better right now.)

[persiflage_1]

Which one needs rephrasing?

[thisbluespirit]

Oh, no, wait, you're right. I'm just not awake yet!!

[persiflage_1]

😎😚

[romanajo123]

I'd about forgotten I'd asked for this one. XD But this was good! it sounds like them.

(and I wonder... *which* Clara was this? o.o )

[thisbluespirit]

Thank you! And yet another one of no doubt thousands of Clara splinters! (Or at least, that was certainly my intention.)